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Todoroki Shouto

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I like him. He's my son now. been a while since I drew fan art.

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Character- Boku no Hero Academia 
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

So, I don't know that I can really critique much since I'm a growing digital artist, but I will start by saying that I really like your usage of warm and cool hues. Your blending is really nice, but maybe it can be pushed a little more. The thing that's really killing it for me is the ring finger, pinky, and the lack of line art around the fingers/hand. I know it's not meant to be blatant due to style, but if you wanted to push it further... I definitely suggest revisiting the hand and giving it some (.5) skin tone lines? Ultimately, it's your piece, and you don't have to take my advice. I feel like maybe the clothing could be a little more defined, too, with darker 'lines/brushstrokes' if you wanted.

It's really not a bad piece though, so well done! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>